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Artist's Comments
Yeah i know title sucks,
I just needed to make something bubbly and pretty to lift me out of my art slump, i know i'll never be as good as the greats like `loish and the like but dam i wish i was and yes shes sitting on a orange. Comments
That's awesome,is it vector or bitmap or both or what the hell??
Not much to critique on this, maybe a shadow to place her feet and maybe bring her blush onto her face a bit more, but I'd love to be able to do something this good. Wd. -- Comics competition [link] its was all done in photoshop!
-- Is now open for commissions! Please check my journal! The Breach Spheres Comic Come join our adventures here! It's class, even the things I mentioned are fine as they are, and might be better as they are.
I really like it, it reminds me of Teddy Kristiansen, without the cynicism. Love that the line-work is defined by the shapes rather than just drawn on too. -- Comics competition [link] colours designed to make your eyes pop out your skull!
-- Is now open for commissions! Please check my journal! The Breach Spheres Comic Come join our adventures here! that was the plan! i sorta wanted things to clash
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June 26
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Critiques
First off, let me say that the pose here is superb, her facial expression is great, and the colors and composition are really fun and summery. Great stuff. Seriously.
There's one thing though, that I've noticed about your work, but I just haven't been able to nail down what it is until now. This piece doesn't really have any dark darks, and certain things blend together. It looks like places where similar colors overlap need it the most, like her toes, or where her left hand is resting on the orange.
The other thing (and this may just me being picky) is that the green things here get too dark too fast, especially her sash. It seems like, from the kind of lighting you're using, that they should stay fairly light, except the part between her legs, the knot-area, and the very edges where it curls around.
Anywho, aside from my little nit-picks this is a really strong piece! I especially like your use of texture here (and color, again. It makes the whole thing look like a delicious popsicle!
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